Comments on: Suffering videos from Animoto (yr 10) http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org Fri, 26 Sep 2008 01:58:23 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 By: Hannah Dar http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-296 Hannah Dar Mon, 02 Jun 2008 20:44:34 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-296 Reema's *Good range of different images *Covered all suffering issues in the world -Make images more shocking to make audience want to do something about it. Ellen's *Very apt music *Good use of very striking images -Cover more areas of suffering Reema’s
*Good range of different images
*Covered all suffering issues in the world

-Make images more shocking to make audience want to do something about it.

Ellen’s
*Very apt music
*Good use of very striking images

-Cover more areas of suffering

]]> By: Tammy Harris http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-295 Tammy Harris Mon, 02 Jun 2008 20:07:04 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-295 Reema- god mix of pictures. the music suited the theme of suffering well. It was a little bit short Julia- each picture was very emotive.the video was just the right legth- not to long, not to short maybe try adding picture of other forms of suffering, for example the suffering of animals Reema- god mix of pictures. the music suited the theme of suffering well.
It was a little bit short

Julia- each picture was very emotive.the video was just the right legth- not to long, not to short
maybe try adding picture of other forms of suffering, for example the suffering of animals

]]> By: Tammy Harris http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-294 Tammy Harris Mon, 02 Jun 2008 20:02:42 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-294 Reemas video-The images used were very good, they all showed a different aspect of suffering, The music was sombre, just like the images, the two were matched well. It was a little bit short though Julia- Very emotive pictures, that were chosen well,. The film was just the right length-not to long, not to short. Maybe include some more images on animals suffering or other forms of suffering Reemas video-The images used were very good, they all showed a different aspect of suffering,
The music was sombre, just like the images, the two were matched well.
It was a little bit short though

Julia- Very emotive pictures, that were chosen well,. The film was just the right length-not to long, not to short.
Maybe include some more images on animals suffering or other forms of suffering

]]> By: Ellen http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-293 Ellen Wed, 28 May 2008 12:41:36 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-293 Homework Hannah Dar: Good Song Good Pictures Could be longer Reema: Good Pictures Good Length Different song? Homework

Hannah Dar:
Good Song
Good Pictures

Could be longer

Reema:
Good Pictures
Good Length

Different song?

]]> By: Joe http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-292 Joe Thu, 22 May 2008 19:08:25 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-292 Video #1: Creator - William Positive // - Good Length - Use of charitys at the end Negative // - Music stays the same, gets a bit repetative and boring. Video #2 Creator - Myran Positive // - Good Length - Variety of different types of suffering. Negative // - Song doesnt suit theme. Video #1:

Creator – William
Positive //
- Good Length
- Use of charitys at the end
Negative //
- Music stays the same, gets a bit repetative and boring.

Video #2

Creator – Myran
Positive //
- Good Length
- Variety of different types of suffering.
Negative //
- Song doesnt suit theme.

]]> By: matthew lauguico http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-291 matthew lauguico Wed, 21 May 2008 20:27:00 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-291 i reviewd two peoples' videos and thought they were quite good but some parts were a bit llacking and confusing. The two peoples' videos i whatched was danny j annd myrans'. I hope i do not offend them in any way but i am just giving my articulate overview on the videos. Firstly, Dannys'pictures included everything to do with the issue of suffering and so did myrans'. however, one of the videos music choice wasnt really a sad melody to choose and this made the idea of suffering a joke in a way. That person may think that suffering is a joke of or that we should not worry about it, but the other persons' video showed that it was a real issue as there music portrayed that and gave the audience a feeling of suffering. This made the audience feel sypathy and this is a good thing as we realise what we have instead of the people in the video. matthew i reviewd two peoples’ videos and thought they were quite good but some parts were a bit llacking and confusing. The two peoples’ videos i whatched was danny j annd myrans’. I hope i do not offend them in any way but i am just giving my articulate overview on the videos. Firstly, Dannys’pictures included everything to do with the issue of suffering and so did myrans’. however, one of the videos music choice wasnt really a sad melody to choose and this made the idea of suffering a joke in a way. That person may think that suffering is a joke of or that we should not worry about it, but the other persons’ video showed that it was a real issue as there music portrayed that and gave the audience a feeling of suffering. This made the audience feel sypathy and this is a good thing as we realise what we have instead of the people in the video. matthew

]]> By: Alice Webster http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-290 Alice Webster Wed, 21 May 2008 20:19:43 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-290 The videos I watched were Alice B's and Hannah Dar's. Alice: I really enjoyed watching her video as it included many, very powerful images in and I could tell that she had thought very carefully about it. I also noticed that you included religious pictures of Jesus. This was a really good idea as it shows the contrast between the devil and Jesus. It also makes you think that if there really is a God, how could he let this suffering happen? However, she could ahve included more inages and maybe have had a theme. Hannah: This was also one of my favourite videos I watched. I thought that her choice of song went very well with thw topic, Her pictures were also different from everybody elses as a lot of people ahd the same. However, it was very short so yuo could have made it longer. You could have also therefore included many more pictures. The videos I watched were Alice B’s and Hannah Dar’s.

Alice:
I really enjoyed watching her video as it included many, very powerful images in and I could tell that she had thought very carefully about it. I also noticed that you included religious pictures of Jesus. This was a really good idea as it shows the contrast between the devil and Jesus. It also makes you think that if there really is a God, how could he let this suffering happen?
However, she could ahve included more inages and maybe have had a theme.

Hannah:
This was also one of my favourite videos I watched. I thought that her choice of song went very well with thw topic, Her pictures were also different from everybody elses as a lot of people ahd the same.
However, it was very short so yuo could have made it longer. You could have also therefore included many more pictures.

]]> By: Nancy http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-288 Nancy Tue, 20 May 2008 20:20:25 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-288 Ellen- 3 good things *It shows the reality of suffering, not holding back with the images *The music is very emotional and the lyrics fit to the images *There is a variety of images 3 improvements *To use more images as they are already quite strong *Maybe use a theme to the video *Organise the images so its not one theme at a time William- 3 good things *The images are very strong *There are a range of images *The images take the focus point instead of the music- focuses on the subject more 3 improvements- *To use stronger music to emphasise the message of the images *Organizing the images so its not set out one theme after another *To focus on suffering worldwide, using a broader theme Becky 3 good things *You did two videos- a lot of images! *Both songs suit the images and are powerful * You used a theme in both 3 improvements * To use a broader range of images, not focusing on just one theme * To use more images * Oraganise the images so they aren't as ordered in terms of subjects and themes Ellen-
3 good things
*It shows the reality of suffering, not holding back with the images
*The music is very emotional and the lyrics fit to the images
*There is a variety of images

3 improvements
*To use more images as they are already quite strong
*Maybe use a theme to the video
*Organise the images so its not one theme at a time

William-
3 good things
*The images are very strong
*There are a range of images
*The images take the focus point instead of the music- focuses on the subject more

3 improvements-
*To use stronger music to emphasise the message of the images
*Organizing the images so its not set out one theme after another
*To focus on suffering worldwide, using a broader theme

Becky
3 good things
*You did two videos- a lot of images!
*Both songs suit the images and are powerful
* You used a theme in both

3 improvements
* To use a broader range of images, not focusing on just one theme
* To use more images
* Oraganise the images so they aren’t as ordered in terms of subjects and themes

]]> By: myran http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-287 myran Tue, 20 May 2008 19:54:19 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-287 I liked joel's video because it showed a range of suffering and had pictures of people from around the world. One thing i think he could improve is the song, i think this song matches the mood of the video, but doesnt have much meaning towards what the video means. I also liked williams video because it had an unusual choice of music, and showed a part of suffering not many people showed properly, homelessness and illness. I think he could've improved it by possibly using more images or focusing it more. I liked joel’s video because it showed a range of suffering and had pictures of people from around the world. One thing i think he could improve is the song, i think this song matches the mood of the video, but doesnt have much meaning towards what the video means.

I also liked williams video because it had an unusual choice of music, and showed a part of suffering not many people showed properly, homelessness and illness. I think he could’ve improved it by possibly using more images or focusing it more.

]]> By: Thomas Eames http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/comment-page-1/#comment-286 Thomas Eames Tue, 20 May 2008 19:38:22 +0000 http://chiswickrs.edublogs.org/suffering-videos-from-animoto-yr-10/#comment-286 [The one with the soundtrack by Everlast is mine] Joe Asquith- I like this one, because it shows both sides of the story. It shows suffering and pain, but it also shows how the people suffering are helped. The one thing that could be improved was the soundtrack - the song didnt seem to have any connection with suffering, it was just another slow song. William Smith- I liked the variety of pictures put into this one. They covered all aspects of suffering, not just poverty and the other stereotypical types. The choice of music also really set the mood for the clip. However, the variety of pictures made it a little hard to follow. [The one with the soundtrack by Everlast is mine]

Joe Asquith-
I like this one, because it shows both sides of the story. It shows suffering and pain, but it also shows how the people suffering are helped. The one thing that could be improved was the soundtrack – the song didnt seem to have any connection with suffering, it was just another slow song.

William Smith-
I liked the variety of pictures put into this one. They covered all aspects of suffering, not just poverty and the other stereotypical types. The choice of music also really set the mood for the clip. However, the variety of pictures made it a little hard to follow.

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